
My double page spread is different to other magazines; however ‘Vibe’ used Jesse v Obama. Mine was more head to head and straight to the point without dwelling on it. I believe that is what the targeted audience want. I have done some research however I have asked Hip-Hop fans for their opinion and they think it’s great. Questions i asked are at the bottom of evaluation. When using the software ‘ AdobeIndesign C2 ‘ I did not know how to make the font wider, because it was very squished together, but still readable which is the main thing. After completing my double page spread for ‘Rhythm’ I was very happy with the outcome. But being it be my own work I knew I maybe slightly bias so I went round my college finding people, I asked 2 Hip-Hop fans, boy and girl and 2 other people who are not such big fans of Hip-Hop, again boy and a girl; Hip-Hop fan 1 (Daniel Woods): Yes, brilliant! Exactly what I would like to be reading about, Artists going head to head, Love it! Hip-Hop fan 2 (Jade Townsend): It looks very sophisticated and well thought-out. I like the colours used and how it is laid out. It does look very busy however it’s very clear what is happening in this double page spread. Other music fan (Jake Powell): Well it does look good, but I can’t really read the red bit, so maybe widen the text or enlarge it. Other music fan (Emma Cook): The text is very small, on the other hand it looks like a real double page spread you would see in a published Hip-Hop magazine.
After receiving this feedback I would definitely make the font much bigger and wider, because Emma Cook struggled to read it, however Jade Townsend thought it looked very sophisticated and very well thought out, but maybe this is a negative because it doesn't look urban enough. But Daniel Woods who is a young black man who i mainly target, really liked the magazine so i was extremely pleased with that.




